I love this Kristen except for the long line mentioning The Power of Positive Thinking. I think the line is too long and the book is too dated. BUT it’s a wonderful poem!
Thank you Nan, I'll revisit that segment with that in mind. I appreciate you reading and commenting. Power of Positive Thinking is a stand in for spiritual bypassing....
“... to see the slow work / it’s business” is an inspired line break and to follow it with the “advertised”/“flies” rhyme is just fantastic.
Thank you James, it was one of those rhymes that invited itself in :) I really appreciate your reading and comment.
I love those rhymes best.
I love this Kristen except for the long line mentioning The Power of Positive Thinking. I think the line is too long and the book is too dated. BUT it’s a wonderful poem!
Thank you Nan, I'll revisit that segment with that in mind. I appreciate you reading and commenting. Power of Positive Thinking is a stand in for spiritual bypassing....
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Beautiful, Kristen!