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James Maynard's avatar

“... to see the slow work / it’s business” is an inspired line break and to follow it with the “advertised”/“flies” rhyme is just fantastic.

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nan's avatar

I love this Kristen except for the long line mentioning The Power of Positive Thinking. I think the line is too long and the book is too dated. BUT it’s a wonderful poem!

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