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Jonathan Potter's avatar

“walking / over hidden graves to attend a wedding” and everything else here is evocative and splendid. I stopped counting at eleven, but saw enough to be enthralled

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Kristen Lenea Ryberg's avatar

Johnathan, I'm glad it came through strongly for you and so appreciate your comment.

thank you

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Diana Renfro's avatar

Intense. Excellent

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Kristen Lenea Ryberg's avatar

Dear Diana, thank you!

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Daniel's avatar

Wow! This poem spoke to me because of my interest in technology and the current human condition. Beautiful and inspiring job!

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Weston Parker's avatar

very good stuff, very rich images. thanks

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Kristen Lenea Ryberg's avatar

Thank you Weston of the wood!

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